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INTRODUCTION

Reading a feature story


Last week I introduced you to the feature story, the type of story typically found in the Outlook section of the Bangkok Post. We noted that feature stories are different in both style and content from news stories. Although features tend to be longer and somewhat more difficult than news stories, many people find them more enjoyable to read because the subject matter is usually not as "heavy".

The story I have chosen this week is a good example of this. It comes from a popular long-running series in Monday's Outlook, entitled Nature. I enjoyed reading the story myself and I also found it to be very good for helping you learn how to read feature stories in general. Below are some suggestions for you try when you read this week's story.

Enjoy the introduction The first few paragraphs of a feature are often quite entertaining. Writers know their readers have many other stories to choose from, so they work hard to catch our interest so we will choose their story. They have many different techniques. They may use humour, they may tell a short little story or they may try to surprise us with something unusual.

Below is an introduction from a recent Outlook feature. Notice that the writer tells us a short story with a surprising ending. What does the writer make you think the story is about at the beginning? What is the story really about?

It is an usual performance. Sweet, tuneful songs fill the cool night air as budding "dancers" make charming graceful moves.

Flowing right and left, up and down, the slender dancers perform in perfect harmony with the melodious voice. Once the last note is sung, the dance troupe (group) stays still, as if frozen in time.

"Many thanks and goodbye. Have a good sleep," the singer says before exiting the garden. Smiling, he rejoices at seeing all his young dancers quietly drift into slumber (sleep).

Every day Pradit Khampermpoon comes down to the Udon Sunshine Orchid Garden he owns in Udon Thani province to sing and dance with the Miss Udon Dancing plant - a unique type of plant which can move its leaves to rhythmic sounds and voices.

Our feature story this week has an introduction which is a little more straightforward. As you read it, consider what techniques he uses to catch our interest.

Quickly look to see how the story is organised Features are often rather long, but they usually have several different topics. If you can find them, you will often find that the story suddenly becomes MUCH easier to read and understand. That is especially true of this week's story. After you have read the introduction, quickly look through the rest of the story and try to find what topics are covered.

Make use of any pictures and picture captions which accompany the story You should find the pictures in this story to be especially useful. In fact, they will help you a lot in understanding one of the story's main topics. Which one?

Try to guess some of the unfamiliar vocabulary from context This term I have given you a lot of practice in guessing new words from context (the words and phrases which surround them) so I won't explain all the words that are likely to be unfamiliar to you.

Pay attention to the conclusion Features usually have an interesting conclusion as well as an introduction. The conclusion often returns to a point or topic covered in the introduction. Look to see if that is true of our feature.

Vocabulary

Here are some words from the story that might be difficult to understand just from reading the context.

endangered speciesa type of animal or plant whose numbers are so few that it is in danger of dying out completely (i.e., becoming extinct)
out of proportionnot having the proper size in relation to the other parts
hawka type of large bird which hunts small animals for food
depressiona part of a surface which is lower than other parts
notionsideas
in circulationbeing talked about or communicated
habitatnatural surroundings in which an animal or plant usually lives


OUR STORY FROM THE BANGKOK POST


A tale about a tail

REPTILES: Visitors from far and wide are going to a school in Phayao province to see some strange tortoises which have big heads and a nifty way of climbing trees

SMITH SUTIBUT

[Tortoise] The border village of Ban Huak in the Phu Sang sub-district of Phayao province is well known among the Thais and Laotians living nearby because it's the only place in the area with a market. Actually, a temporary market which is held twice a month.

But lately, visitors to the village are coming from farther away, and their purpose is not to shop. They've come to see a unique species of tortoise - the tao pulu.

More than 40 of the rare animals are kept at the village's school, all of them donated. According to Acharn Udom Ruamsuk, the principal of Ban Huak School, it was back in 1992 when the school got its first tortoise.

The beast was donated by a villager returning from a trip to the Doi Pha Mon-Phu Chi Fah Forest, which has been the source of food and wood for families in the area for generations.

"The man intended to eat it, but I asked him to let me keep this strange animal at school so the students could see it," recalled the principal, adding he later found out the tortoise is an endangered species protected by law.

"I then asked every villager I met to donate any tortoises they possessed. From then on, villagers began to bring in tortoises, one after another, until we reached the current number."

So what makes this tortoise so special?

What makes the tao pulu really different from other tortoises is its strange appearance.

The following is a description written by the late Dr Boonsong Lekhakul, Thailand's nature conservation pioneer, in his book Thammachart Nanasat, published by Sarakadee Press:

[Tortoise] "The tao pulu has several interesting features. Firstly, its head is so big it looks out of proportion. So big it couldn't draw its head inside the shell. To compensate, the tortoise is equipped with biting jaws which it uses as a defensive weapon. Its mouth snaps faster than any other tortoise.

"The upper mandible curves down like a hawk's hooked beak. With its powerful jaws, it can snap ferociously at anything you put in front of it. So, when you feed the tortoise, it's better to put the food on one end of a stick than handing it the food with your fingers.

"Unlike the domed shells of most tortoises, the shell of the tao pulu is flat with a slight, sloped depression in the back. Besides, the carapace and the lower shell are not directly connected. As for the tail, it is even longer than the length of the shell."

Another unique thing about this particular species is its climbing ability. Acharn Udom is well-aware of this because some of the animals have escaped from the school's semi-natural tortoise pen by climbing out over its 50-centimetre concrete wall. To prevent more escapes, the principal has lined the wall with slippery metal sheets.

In nature, the tao pulu's climbing ability - which is attributed to its four strong, clawed legs and its tail which acts like a fifth limb to help in pushing - enables the animal to climb over rocks and other obstacles.

Occasionally, the tortoise even climbs trees in its search for a spot where it can bask in the sun without having to worry about predators. (Like other reptiles, the tao pulu needs the warmth of the sun to increase the efficiency of its food digestion.)

The diet of the tao pulu is different from most other tortoises too, which are vegetarian. This animal, however, likes to feed on fish, shrimps, molluscs and crabs, hunting at night.

At Ban Huak school though, feeding time is scheduled to suit humans and the captive tortoises are fed during the day. What's on the menu depends on what is available, from the tortoise's natural food to pork, chicken intestines and food pellets like those used at catfish farms.

The principal said the province's fishery office once suggested he buy more tortoises from the villagers and breed them for commercial purposes. But he didn't buy the idea, fearing it would only encourage villagers to go out and hunt the tortoises in the wild.

"It would pose a further threat to an already endangered species. I prefer to wait for villagers to come in and donate them," he said, adding in the past the tao pulu were hunted to supply both the exotic pet trade and people who wrongly believed the tortoise's meat possessed medicinal properties.

With such misleading notions still in circulation and its natural habitat being destroyed, the future of the tao pulu, like several other wildlife species, is bleak.

The tortoise pond at Ban Huak school may not prevent the tao pulu from becoming extinct in the wild, but at least it is drawing public attention to the species before it happens.

FOLLOW-UP

Bonus

The Nature series in Outlook usually includes a short, very attractive column entitled "Did you know?". I have given you an example below of the column which appeared on the same day as our feature story. It's very appropriate, isn't it.

[Tortoise]

Teacher’s Note

This week my main purpose is to give your students a strategy for reading the feature stories which are found in the Outlook section of the Bangkok Post. It won't work for all of them, but it will for many.

As you can see, I have given the students five suggestions. Here are some points you can stress and some additional points you can raise with your students.

I have devoted the most space to the introduction because this is what often causes the most confusion for students (and even some teachers). The reason is that in an attempt to catch the reader's interest, feature writers sometimes use clever devices that are not always easy for non-native speakers to follow. This might be humour, word play, a short story, a surprise of some type or a host of other techniques.

Unfortunately, some students become frustrated and think the rest of the story will be just as difficult to understand. In fact, the opposite is usually true. Feature stories generally become noticably easier after the introduction. So be sure to tell your students not to give up.

The introduction in this week's story is quite easy. Notice the first two paragraphs are designed to catch interest and to introduce the topic. A short story then follows to explain how the village of Ban Huak became a place to find the tao pulu.

Once past the introduction, I strongly suggest that you have your students look to see how the rest of the story is organised. Sometimes a long story which looks complicated, turns out to be quite easy.

That is certainly true of this week's story. Immediately after the introduction comes the question, "So what makes this tortoise so special?" The body of the story gives three answers to this question - its appearance, its climbing habits, and its diet. Easy, isn't it? My next suggestion concerns the pictures. In this case, the pictures will be of great assistance in understanding the first topic - the tao pulu's strange appearance. Have your students refer to the pictures often as they read through this section.

Next, I suggest that students use context to guess the meanings of unfamiliar words. There are some excellent opportunities for developing context skills in this story. Take this sentence, for example: "Unlike the domed shells of most tortoises, the shell of the tao pulu is flat…" The writer is obviously contrasting the word "domed" with "flat". Or take the sentence which says the tao pulu climbs trees so it won't have to worry about predators. Clearly a "predator" must be an enemy of some kind.

Finally, there is the conclusion. As is typical of many features, the writer returns to a theme introduced in the introduction - the concept of endangered species. The tao pulu is one such species and the village school is helping it survive in its own small way.

One more thing. If you haven't been using the "Did you know?" column which appears on Monday's, you might want to start. It is an excellent column to cut out and save for information gap activities. I am planning on giving you an example next term.


•This lesson was prepared by Acharn Terry Fredrickson, BA Stanford, MA (TESL) University of Minnesota, Manager of the Educational Services Department at the Bangkok Post and general editor of this programme.

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