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Creating anticipation
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Bangkok is increasingly making its mark on the world stage and this is reflected in the growing number of major international artists who are attracted to perform here.
Our feature this week anticipates the arrival of American indie band Incubus. However, this excerpt contains more than just information about the forthcoming concert. It is written with a particular audience in mind and Nick Grossman has included some of his own musical opinions to make it livelier. This is quite common in feature articles, though not in news reports. Aiming for the right audience First of all, see if you can identify the target audience of this feature. A target audience is the typical age range, gender and social group who would be interested in reading the article. You may find it helpful to highlight a number of words or phrases that only certain people would be familiar with. Who would these people be? Secondly, on a separate sheet of paper, create two columns entitled ‘facts’ and ‘opinions’. In the first column, list as many straight-forward facts (objective points) as you can spot in the text and, in the other column, write down quotes that you consider to be opinions (subjective points) of either the writer or someone else featured in the article. When you have done this, discuss with your friends what kind of effect the mixture of fact and opinion has on the way a reader would view this article. For instance, would a person who likes indie music, but is not a huge fan of Incubus, consider attending this concert after reading the article? Why or why not? Your own preview If you have time, you could imagine your favourite band is coming to play in Bangkok and write a preview of the concert. Try to use some of the techniques in Nick Grossman’s article to excite your target audience. Mix your article with objective and subjective points but remember not to appear too enthusiastic as you may put off many of your readers. Keep it informative and interesting.
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